Hey Jackmoxey -
I can get your logo into shape in a few days. I haven't much on the schedule so I should be able to devote most of my time to it.
In fact, this looks kind of fun. I'd love to start out by tossing a bunch of different designs at you - in addition to the two you presented, and see what you think. I could do a lot of fun stuff with this.
Lemme know what you think,
Zac