Hi,
How are you. I am a copy writer and professional creative writer as well, with 22 published e books. I am looking forward to cooperating with you. This is a sample:
Hi (client name),
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(List of the Courses)
Our team will help you through all the stages of your education. Beside FAQs, you can contact our team personally at any time to get help.
Our courses are guaranteed: you can get your money back if you don’t like the course.
If you apply for more than 1 course, you will get %20 discount.
For a short time, we offer a bonus (%10 discount)
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Features of the e mail:
1-The e mail is personal: the pronoun “you” is used 7 times and the pronoun “your” is used 4 times in addition to addressing the client with his name.
2-The e mail concentrates on the benefits:
-Invest in Education and You will Harvest Money and Position
-Guaranteed courses: the client can get his money back
-Experienced and professional educators
-Personal help
-Accredited certificates
3- Two Offers:
-%20 discount when applying for more than one course
-%10 discount for a short time
4-Besides, the e mail is not long
Best wishes
Wael El-Manzalawy