Professional company Bio and story needs writing.

Status: Closed
Prize: $50
Entries Received: 26
Winner: GavinParish

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Contest Brief

We are a new company and I have just had a go at writing a bio for our website and possibly to be used in some local newspapers. I'm not a professional writer and would like help with making our bio shine.I have attached the bio, it is in Australian English, please submit all entries in Australian English. This is the first of many articles and we would like to find a winner to write for us into the future.

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ssethumadhavan
- 10 years ago
I think I just missed the deadline by a minute can I send the entry
- 10 years ago
ssethumadhavan
- 10 years ago
@vantuaboy could you please provide me one message that your readers should carry forward after reading this article, I am planning to submit an article hence if you can do that it would be great for both of us. Else I will take the last paragraph of your article as the one, which I have noted for reference. "Aquamarine Personalised Home Care is committed to providing the highest quality non-medical home care services and treating all clients, of all ages with dignity and respect.
- 10 years ago
ssethumadhavan
- 10 years ago
@Vanuatabosy, Could you please describe the relationship between Brian Farrel and Barry Holland. Are Brian and Barry completely un related? Could you let me know if Brian's Grand parents and Barry's father are connected.
- 10 years ago
writersquality
- 10 years ago
@vanuatuboy: Dear Sir. Please have a look at entry #28 . This is my third entry to contest. Hope this time I did it the way you asked. Please give valuable feedback.
- 10 years ago
mynk16
- 10 years ago
@vanuatuboy

Read out the Messages section of #24 . It's very important.

- Mayank
- 10 years ago
Contest Holder
- 10 years ago
similar length, yes improve vocab, organised as you see best
- 10 years ago
smshah
- 10 years ago
Can you please specify exactly the requirements ?
Should the length be the same as the sample or less?
Should the vocabulary be improved? Should it be more formal or inclined towards informal language?
Should the article be organised more or the same structure be used?
- 10 years ago
vampyfree
- 10 years ago
Hello vanuatuboy, i hope you can read in image submitted..or else i will send word file. :)
- 10 years ago
writersquality
- 10 years ago
I'll submit my entry very soon.
- 10 years ago
TheGuyver2040
- 10 years ago
Vanuatuboy,

Would it be possible for you to guarantee payment?
- 10 years ago
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1. Contest Holder
  - 10 years ago
  Thank you
  - 10 years ago
2. TheGuyver2040
  - 10 years ago
  Done. See entries #2 and #3 .
  - 10 years ago
Reejurekh
- 10 years ago
Can you please guarantee the contest?
- 10 years ago
1. Contest Holder
  - 10 years ago
  I just guaranteed it now, apologies I'm new to this.
  - 10 years ago
shashankroy
- 10 years ago
I can do this . Please contact me
- 10 years ago