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Lumin-Mood Gorgeous LED Shines Your Day

Hi, here is a completely new entry of mine. Also, I have modified the last entry and resubmitted it as per your suggestion. Please do kindly have a look and let me know. Thank you.

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  • rchslly9899
    rchslly9899
    • 3 years ago

    Well, no, of course not every entry would have to be revised. In fact, my very first entry didn't have grammatical errors. It was only because you asked me to make it more powerful that I started messing things somehow. Also, if you view my profile and see review from my other clients, you can tell that I don't usually make such mistakes.

    • 3 years ago
  • bammmllc
    Contest Holder
    • 3 years ago

    These are things I need you to do on your own.

    • 3 years ago
  • bammmllc
    Contest Holder
    • 3 years ago

    I like it but there are things like very well that can be turned into one powerful word 'exceptional' and 'in giving your room' could be (casting vibrantly radiant vibes).

    • 3 years ago