Hook line for my music - Hindi

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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  Hi All, In first cut I have rejected all entries which do not match the notes they are meant for. In the entries that fully or partially match the musical notes, which are still remaining, I would review these over the next few days and select the winning entry. Please allow me some time as this is only a hobby for me and my business comes first, so I would do it as soon as I can find some time. Thanks.

  • 3 years ago
  1. 

     KiranGill06

     • 3 years ago

     Okay!

     • 3 years ago
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  LokendraG

  • 3 years ago

  thanks you so much for your feedback.

  • 3 years ago
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  ay16943077

  • 3 years ago

  #29 #30 #31

  • 3 years ago
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  KiranGill06

  • 3 years ago

  Hello! I have submitted three entries which fit the beats exactly. I can mail you the vocals too, just to show how they match the tune.

  • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  Please all check my post on this project which is about English hook line for same tune as well for further information on what is expected. You are welcome to participate in that contest as well.
  
  https://www.freelancer.com/contest/Hook-line-for-music-track-English-1908089/comments
  
  Thank you.

  • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  Hello All, I have been checking these entries. I feel none of them go with the tune. If you listen the song on spotify or gaana or other services, you would notice the guitar track starting from 0:15. This is the melody track that needs to be replaced with the vocals. I would explain it in an Indian way. :-)
  
  It has 5 points in that tune "tun, tun, tun, taane taaan", which repeats 3 times. In Hindi, this line would fit perfectly, "Dha-kka kyun, maare yaaar, Dha-kka kyun, maare yaaar". Obviously this line is an example only, I would not use this line for the song. In English this line fits those 5 notes, "I love you, and you love me back", where I love you is for "tun, tun, tun", and "and you love me back" sung fast fits "taane taaan" section.
  
  The scope of this contest is to create a very simple line that fits this section that gets stuck in people's head, that if they hear it they just keep humming it.

  • 3 years ago
  1. 

     priyajen

     • 3 years ago

     noted

     • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  I request if you could withdraw the entries that are not matching the tune and then if you feel like submitting a different entry, you are welcome to do so. Thank you.

  • 3 years ago
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  priyajen

  • 3 years ago

  DEAR CH,GREETING ROM INDIA.I AM WELL VERSED WITH HINDI..YOU CAN VONNECT ME VIA CHAT..THANK YOU.

  • 3 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 3 years ago

     Hi Priyadarsani, The chat button is disabled for me. I only have option to hire or to invite to project.

     • 3 years ago
  2. 

     priyajen

     • 3 years ago

     SIR, I HAVE UPLOADED MY ENTRY.KINDLY CHECK THE LINES WITH MY DESCRIPTIONS IN THE DESCRIPTION BOX OF MY ENTRY.IT WILL HELP TO JUDGE YOU A LOT.

     • 3 years ago
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  juanstefang7

  • 3 years ago

  Greetings! So we just submit an idea for a hook? No production?

  • 3 years ago
  1. 
     Contest Holder

     • 3 years ago

     Yes. This contest is about the hook line for intro tones only. Thanks.

     • 3 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 3 years ago

  Hello All,
  
  Thank you for your response. In case there is a confusion the hook line must fit in the intro melody in this track and should be such that can be vocalised with these notes. Something very very simple that just gets stuck in the head.
  
  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f_oFKkkzZZc
  
  Regards.

  • 3 years ago
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  priyajen

  • 3 years ago

  LOT OF QNS IN MIND LIKE HOW MANY WORDS..FEEL ETC...!!!!

  • 3 years ago

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