Graphic Design for Okabashi

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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  I definitely like the changes you made, thanks! When you give us the final product will be coded already with HTML? In what format will you be giving it to us in?

  • 11 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     We are definitely open to more designs. But if we do end up sticking with Donatas, you are welcome to look at the other contests that we have launched. But definitely feel free to post what you have done.

     • 11 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     And Donatas, I do have more changes for you. I can shoot you an email now and we can communicate through there.

     • 11 years ago
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  doncedesign

  • 11 years ago

  Hi Okabashi! Thank you for great feedback! I've been working on your requested changes, please check on #8 and also I would like to suggest some interactive functions #9
  
  1. The right green bar "more about" can show 3 or more advantages with pictures and link to Foot care section.
  2. The color selection is great opportunity for help to decide add to cart the Gardenia Shoes! So, when the user select one color will show the Name of the color, price and show form with size selection and when: Add to cart!
  3. Image with 3 shoes is the product Slideshow, is moving all the time and showing all range of colors. Once selected, goes to product information page or add to cart option...
  
  So, I hope you like the last changes and we can keep working on all details that you desire.
  
  Thanks a lot! Donatas

  • 11 years ago
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  doncedesign

  • 11 years ago

  Dear Okabashi, I´ve been working on the design to make it look more appealing and give it a clearer garden look! Please give me your opinion so we can continue working together in order to find the greatest style for this landing page! Looking forward to hearing from you soon, best regards! Donatas

  • 11 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     Hi Donatas,
     Good work! This second design is definitely much better than the first. Two things, why is the customer testimonial is a foreign language? And, how do we view the different interactive functions you installed? Like a hover-over over the shoe and color palet may change the color of the shoe automatically...things like that. We will continue working with you, thanks!

     • 11 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 11 years ago

     Oh, I just figured out that the customer testimonial section was suppose to be filter text. Don't worry about the customer testimonial section, we can fill it in on our own. A couple changes, move the image that is below the logo (three shoes) to below the turf. Also, we like the wood image behind the title, but could you find a different image for it, a cleaner image? And if you check out our surf page, www.okabashi.com/info/2012_surf, you can see that you are actually not limited to the space just boxed in the page (if that makes sense). We like the red shovel better than the brown. And, just a minor grammar change, it is suppose to be "100% recyclable shoes."

     • 11 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 11 years ago

  Hi, thanks for your hard work and effort. The interactive functions are a definite plus, but the layout doesnt really fit the color scheme of our company. If you check out our website www.Okabashi.com and view some of the other landing pages we've created such as Arthritis Shoe or Diabetic Shoe, you may get a better feel of the style we want. The natural background is good, but perhaps it should be more "natural," right now, it's a bit fictional, if you know what i mean. And the title text "Gardenia" should be changed as well to fit our style more. Thanks so much! We see lots of potential in your designs and if you could make some changes, then that would be awesome!

  • 11 years ago
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     doncedesign

     • 11 years ago

     Hi Okabashi, thank you for your feedback, I understand what you mean and I have founded the Arthritis Shoes landing page, so I'll be working today on adapt my idea on your webpage style. Also, I'll provide other idea what I have for more elegant style. So, see you later with new designs! Thank you again!

     • 11 years ago
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  doncedesign

  • 11 years ago

  Hi Okabashi! First at all it's a very big pleasure for me to present my ideas for your company, I hope we can work together to find the common style and make all necessary work until get the perfect landing page! Please check out my submitted work #1 . The idea is to show the natural feeling background with some interactive functions: Shoes photo slider in the middle, color selection and call-to-action bottoms. This design is made 3000x3000px so it's really high-quality, please check out on some details: #2 #3 #4 #5 .
  Thank you again and please feedback!
  
  I'll be very attentive to make by best.
  
  Donatas

  • 11 years ago
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  doncedesign

  • 11 years ago

  Hi! I like your products, it's really good! I have some ideas for your landing page, will upload soon! Thank you for the opportunity! Donatas

  • 11 years ago

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