Design for a Bean to Bar chocolate company logo and chocolate bar packaging

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  Contest Holder

  • 7 years ago

  Hi there. I like the wrapper, but I believe the logo is not chocolate enough, and the typography is not working... What do you say?

  • 7 years ago
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     TheSameAsYou

     • 7 years ago

     Hi, Guy!
     Thank You for the feedback.
     I appreciate it.
     If You really want to know My opinion, please, let Me speak with You just like I would speak with My old friend.
     
     In general, I like this design, becouse it looks luxury, organic and funky at the same time. It looks different then most of chocolate packages. If I'll see it in a shop, I would pay attention to this product. I'm sure at 85%. And I like it.
     Yes, I agree with You that the logo is not chocolate enough. Maybe, I would add a cacao pictures in the leaves. I like that the logo has combinations of different colors, it's realy interesting, attractive and looks organic, but it's true, it's not chocolate enough.
     You know, I like typography in this design, because it's clean, only few sentences. Easy readable. I like the hand drawing sentence: ''Hand made in Amsterdam''.
     At any way, typography can be easily changed.

     • 7 years ago
  2. 

     TheSameAsYou

     • 7 years ago

     I have 2 more thoughts about chocolate design:
     1) I want to see a picture of small chocolate bars under the words '' Congo coconut''.
     2) A wrapper can be transparent. In this case, buyers will see the product.
     
     This is my opinion about current design.
     
     I just honest with You.
     
     Hope, I helped You, Guy.
     
     Best regards.
     Ivan

     • 7 years ago
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  TheSameAsYou

  • 7 years ago

  The wrapper with the sticker on it.

  • 7 years ago