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Dear CH, Think Different is one of my all time favorite commercials. The Think Different narration is 93 words. Mine is 107 words including the nursery rhyme. Think Different is 1.10 mins, mine can be created between 1 min and max 1min 20 secs. Think Different was made entirely with stock film footage. Except for the opening, this film too can be made with stock film footage. I have only written the narration part. I hope you like it. Thank you.

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  • roy2varkey
    roy2varkey
    • 4 years ago

    Thanks. Will work on your input. By the way, is there any time limit for the film?

    • 4 years ago
  • PursanovaWater
    Contest Holder
    • 4 years ago

    Or

    In attempt to save his son the quantum physicist has unraveled nature’s powerful secrets of water. From there the connatural technology has circled the glob revolutionizing everywhere water is used. This is Pursanova and we Pursue goals greater than ourselves to change the world for good.

    • 4 years ago
  • PursanovaWater
    Contest Holder
    • 4 years ago

    Great I like the first half. After the part with the physicist say in an attempt to save his son. Then something of the nature that the miracle has spread throughout the glob. Then introduce a vision. For instance, because when when you are crazy enough to think you can change the world it does. The power of nature is replicated to purify and re energize your water. The significance- unmatched results.

    Take writing freedom and see what you are inspired to do. I want the selling product part to be more.subtle.

    • 4 years ago