Hi :) I've read the script, I'm honest, is the first time I read a professional one, but I think is really detailed, because all the information about the sound and location put me inside the story.
In particular in this moment: (The word “Vibration” appears when he says it. It vibrates then
disappears after a few seconds.) when Frank explain to Jane what are Sound Waves, I imagined the entire scene.
I' m a musician and producer, and I really enjoyed the way your represent and give life to Sound with this script.
It' s not simple to explain the value and feelings, sounds can give us in a non conscious way.
To understand even better the contest, and the characters, I'll give a little intro to every character, at least only at Frank, in the way to give him more personality, and to make the watcher or reader, more in empathy with him; this will put the watcher, in an emotional identification with the "principal" character of this story. (Because Frank, give literally Sound to the sound).
I really enjoyed this script, I don' t know what is the final destination of this, but I will really happy to support in any way, and hope you good luck, have a nice day,
focuus