Proofread schooling essay in postgraduate course

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I am Master students to major in International Develolpments and Education in UK

My nationality is Japanese.

This is essay of schooling essay for development before I submit to faculties in university.

Essay of Title is schooling is the best way to be educated children in diveloping countries?

I show the part of introduction in essay.

Introduction

In this essay, I attempt to illustrate that schooling is the best way to educate children in developing countries or not.

First, I introduced purpose of education to develop in developed countries in history. This essay will examine if major individual developed countries are different purpose of education or not. Did these developed countries have same, similar and different purpose in education? Are there common educational purposes in the world? I show example of United States, German, France, England and Japan. Moreover I will pick up educational purpose from economics, philosophy, history of developed countries, and development studies. Whether common educational purposes are able to be fulfilled or not by schooling is best way or not. That is to say, this is main criteria judged in this essay. What type of education systems fulfill common sense of educational purpose is suitable and desirable in developing world to have limitation and barriers? How suitable various type of education is in poverty? Concrete example of education including schooling will be picked up in next part.

Second, I attempt to examine educational circumstances in both government and private schools in developing countries in particular India and Ghana. Especially, I illustrate that private school that target students in poor will be able to provide excellent service in future since various type of private schools have been mushrooming replace of government schools. Government schools have lots of inadequate problems to affect students and pupils in school. Typical problems in government schools in poor countries are teacher absenteeism and low motivation, ratio between teachers and students, lack of English media instruction, low infrastructure, and insufficient number of educational materials. On the other hand, private schools in developing countries collect popularity among parents, students and society, because they provide high quality educational service and better infrastructures. Most of private schools in poor countries are mainly not for privileged people but unprivileged family and students in poverty. Moreover, I examine what condition is hard for poor families and students through schooling and solutions. What do parents expect children to do through schooling?

Third, nowadays Information computer technology has been adapted in developed countries. I will argue how potential self-learning through e-learning is education in poverty in future. How self-learning and e-learning system should be utilized for education situation especially poor students or students who can’t go to school. How should self-learning through e-learning be utilized for education fields under current situation?

Word count is about 4082W

Deadline is withine 24hours.

It is not hard essay.

You can understand with common sense.

Budget is 30US$

Qualificaton is obtaining bachelor degree, Master or PHD in the humanities in english language.

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