Hi, I am a university student studying English and journalism, and I am interested to help you out with editing. I have had experience editing articles, short stories and marketing material. Besides just correcting any mistakes in grammar and sentence structure, I can also help you polish your writing and make sure the message is clear and straightforward. My style of writing is simple, casual and easy to read, yet professional at the same time.
I am from Hong Kong as well and I am too familiar with the broken English of many business advertisements. I am determined to rewrite your company profile to the best of my abilities. I'll make revision after revision with you until the final product is one that you are satisfied with.
I've read through the profile you included and have a good idea of how it can be improved. As it is quite short, I can complete the job in less than a day.
Thank you for reading my proposal and I hope you can consider hiring me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.