After Effects Editing and Tuning

Hey there- here's the existing video: [login to view URL] I need it refined quite a bit- about 3-4 hours of work just tuning things. My monitor is very bright, so I think some lighting, color, and brightness adjustments need to be made. Also where the retainers are turning, we need to make them turn in the same position- it's a seperate comp- you just have to put it in the perfect spot in the timeline- there's wierd text in white that came out of nowhere in the render- that needs to get removed. The clips around the smile reveal need to be repositioned to reflect what the voiceover says about smiling. Because of the nature of templates, the ending just seems rushed- I need this really worked with and made perfect. I will be getting the new better voiceover for you as well. There are a lot more clips as well, so you can look through and maybe reorganize to give the commercial a little more visual context. I feel the pictures could match up a little better. If you think you can help me make this perfect, let's go!