HI there! Thanks so much on your feedback for #243 !
Is there anything I could do to improve it? Let me thank you for your sharp and smart feedback. I could work very comfortable :).
Just let me know if you want me to work on something else!
7 years ago
7 years ago
Thanks so much for your work on #243 , it was one of our favourite designs! It's such a pity we couldn't share the award money! :(
HI there! Thanks for your words. Yeah... It is a pity but not for the money but for the contest. I really liked the concept and style required and I enjoyed working for you. Good luck with your project! Hope we can work together in the future!
Yeah, heaps better! It's quite good! Could you try the following, please?
- Remove the awning and close the door on the Airstream :)
- Make the Airstream appear silver?
- Make the word AIRSTREAM slightly bigger or Dreams slightly smaller (the focus is on AIRSTREAM)
- play with the colours a bit? (no reds or blacks, please)
Please rate and give feedback for #240. I decided to make the font for "Airstream" shiny. Felt it made it stand out a bit more. I also made the side borders larger so the image would feel more even with the logo.
Hi there, thanks for your submission! It comes across as quite Asian, whereas the Airstream is American and we're based in Australia :) We've given links in the brief to show what fonts we like, perhaps you could have another play and change the fonts for 'dreams'? Thanks!
HI there! So sweet of you answering every entry with such detail! Thanks so muach. It is really kind from you.
I will work on your feedback and come with a new logo. Hope it is not too late! Thanks again! :)